Background: Recently, I bought a new I phone because my old one dropped into the toilet.
Topic Sentence: There are many factors which influence me why I pick the I phone.
Thesis Statement: Here are three reasons why.
The first main idea: practicability
Supporting idea: 1. find informations immediately
2. make a phone call
3. text message
The second main idea: save time
Supporting idea: 1. I'm already familiar with its software
2. some informations about me were already on the I Cloud
3. smoothly
The third main idea: cheaper & unique function
Supporting idea: 1. Apple store give me a discount if I give my old one to recycle
2. Other brand new phone is more expensive
3. There is an unique software which is called Facetime in I phone
Conclusion: People have different views when they make their own decisions to buy something. For me, I consider about its practicability, save time, price and feature.
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